u should let me look at this. also there is something that bothers me about the beer pong pic being so clear. i like the way the type works with the top image of water allot. blah blah blah,
i would definitely replace the beer pong one with something else. i have issues with that bold white line bisecting the P and that f, but other than that i think it's neato. the white looks good over those blues.
maybe think about playing the rest of your secondary info (at prosperos and the address) alligned with the other text on the left of the p. also think about trying a couple more dramitic shifts in scale change. like maybe the text i just mentioned could be the same size as images still & moving of time spent in a small island nation. i really enjoy how the document this note plays in with the title of the show. maybe one where you keep just that photo, this way your not giving away too much as far as what people can expect to see. sorry, back to scale changes. maybe try all the info like the date and location one size and closer together, ur name is at a pretty good size, i don't know, i could keep sayin shit all day, design can drive someone crazy. good luck
I like the poster so far
ReplyDeleteu should let me look at this. also there is something that bothers me about the beer pong pic being so clear. i like the way the type works with the top image of water allot. blah blah blah,
ReplyDeletei would definitely replace the beer pong one with something else. i have issues with that bold white line bisecting the P and that f, but other than that i think it's neato. the white looks good over those blues.
ReplyDeletemaybe think about playing the rest of your secondary info (at prosperos and the address) alligned with the other text on the left of the p. also think about trying a couple more dramitic shifts in scale change. like maybe the text i just mentioned could be the same size as images still & moving of time spent in a small island nation. i really enjoy how the document this note plays in with the title of the show. maybe one where you keep just that photo, this way your not giving away too much as far as what people can expect to see. sorry, back to scale changes. maybe try all the info like the date and location one size and closer together, ur name is at a pretty good size, i don't know, i could keep sayin shit all day, design can drive someone crazy. good luck
ReplyDeleteI would like to see your guys newest poster you have created.
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